Ashlee Simpson had a nose job, got two tattoos, and her hair is blond again.
This sentence is incorrect because it contains an error in parallelism. The first two items in the list are verb phrases and the last item in the list is a clause. Items in a list should be in the same part of speech.
Change the clause to a verb phrase to correct the sentence.
Ashlee Simpson had a nose job, got two tattoos, and changed her hair color from black to blond.
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