The opening-day revenues for Mission Impossible:III were less than Mission Impossible:II.
This sentence is incorrect because it contains a faulty comparison. What is being compared in this sentence? Revenues are compared to a movie; this is not logical. Revenues should be compared to revenues. Revise the sentence so that the comparison makes sense:
The opening-day revenues for Mission Impossible:III were less than the debut revenues for Mission Impossible:II.
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