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Samuel makes an error in modifier confusion


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"If I hit a bad shot, people five fairways away know it because I'm yelling [his favorite curse word], but if I hit a good shot, I'm yelling too. Everybody knows the difference in the yelling. Either Sam is playing well, or he's playing bad." - Samuel L. Jackson, in People, about his behavior on the golf course

Samuel has made an error in modifier confusion: he has used an adjective to modify a verb. Only an adverb can modify a verb.

In the last sentence, the second instance of the verb "playing" is modified by the adjective "bad." This is incorrect because an adjective cannot modify a verb. To correct the error, replace the adjective with an adverb.

"Either Sam is playing well, or he's playing badly."

"Either Sam is playing well, or he's playing poorly."

Usage: Dakota chooses an adjective instead of an adverb.


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Proper diction requires an understanding of words that are misused.

"I sing to myself and my sister looks at me weird." - Dakota Fanning in BOP

This quote contains an error in modifier form.

Dakota used an adjective to modify a verb, and only adverbs can modify verbs.

"Weird" is an adjective used, in this sentence, to describe how Dakota's sister looks at her. Since "looks" is a verb, an adverb should modify this action. Change "weird" to "weirdly."

"I sing to myself and my sister looks at me weirdly."

Note that the verb "look" can function either as an action verb, as in this sentence, or as a linking verb. A linking verb can connect a subject with an adjective, as in the following sentence:

"When I sing to myself, I look weird to my sister."

Avoiding Vague Expressions and Empty Modifiers


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Some words and phrases tend to weaken the effect of a piece of writing because they do not enhance the meaning of the document. These terms may be easy to overlook because they are common in colloquial speech. Try to notice these vague expressions and "empty" modifiers and consider avoiding terms that add little value to your writing.



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Adverbs



Adverbs give information about an action or quality's manner (answering the question "How?"), time (answering the question "When?"), place (answering the question "Where?"), degree (answering the question "How much?" or "To what extent?"), or number (answering the question "How many times?" or "In what order?").


This entry continues with a further discussion of adverbs and example sentences.

Bob ate hungrily. (How did he eat?)

Sally went shopping yesterday. (When did she go?)

I put the tickets there. (Where did I put them?)

He is incredibly funny. (To what extent is he funny?)

I already told you twice. (How many times did I tell you?)

We got to the party first. (In what order did we get there?)

Many adverbs end in "-ly," but not all words that end in "-ly" are adverbs. Do not mistake adjectives such as "friendly" and "lonely" for adverbs.

An adverb can be a single word, a phrase, or a clause.

Bob ate hungrily. ("Hungrily" is an adverb that is a single word.)

Bob ate with great hunger. ("With great hunger" is a prepositional adverb phrase.)

Bob ate because he was hungry. ("Because he was hungry" is an adverb clause.)

A conjunctive adverb connects two independent clauses. These are some of the more common conjunctive adverbs:

  • therefore
  • however
  • nevertheless
  • nonetheless
  • still
  • moreover
  • consequently

Bob was hungry; therefore, he ate a cookie.

The conjunctive adverb "therefore" connects the independent clauses "Bob was hungry" and "he ate a cookie." Note the punctuation in this sample sentence: the first independent clause is followed by a semicolon, and the conjunctive adverb is followed by a comma.

Adverbs such as "almost," "only," and "merely" should be located next to the words they modify to avoid confusion.

Bob only ate two cookies.

In this sentence, "only" modifies the verb "ate." This means that all Bob did was eat cookies. He did not do anything else. While it may be true that all Bob did was eat cookies, if the purpose of the sentence is to explain that he ate no more than two cookies, the word "only" does not express that meaning in this position. Move "only" next to the word it modifies to express this meaning.

Bob ate only two cookies.

In this sentence, "only" modifies the adjective "two."

Adverbs used for comparison are either comparative or superlative.

  • A comparative adverb is used to compare two people or things. Comparative adverbs generally end in "-er" or are themselves modified by "more" or "less."

Apples and peaches are delicious, but I like peaches better.

  • A superlative adjective is used to compare more than two people or things. Superlative adjectives generally end in "-est" or are themselves modified by "most" or "least."

Apples, peaches, and bananas are delicious, but I like peaches best.

Do not confuse comparative and superlative adjectives. Comparative adjectives can be used only to compare two people or things, and superlative adjectives can be used only to compare more than two people or things.

The term "split infinitive" refers to the placement of an adverb between "to" and the verb in an infinitive. The use of split infinitives is quite controversial, as many grammarians and writers sanction their use in instances in which avoiding them would result in awkward or confusing syntax. Others believe that split infinitives should never be used under any circumstances and that sentences should be rewritten to avoid their use. Standardized examinations treat split infinitives as errors to be identified and corrected.

Be sure to completely close the window.

The adverb "completely" splits the infinitive "to close." To avoid the use of a split infinitive, move the adverb to the end of the sentence.

Be sure to close the window completely.

One of the most notable instances of the use of a split infinitive is the expression "to boldly go where no man has gone before" from the opening credits of Star Trek. Consider how the flow of the words changes when the syntax is rearranged to avoid the split infinitive: "to go boldly where no man has gone before" or "boldly to go where no man has gone before."

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